I really like this. It's very soft and fitting and the melody is amazing. I would suggest that you use less reverb on the kick so it wouldn't take away as much of the volume from the song itself. Also, the vocals need to EQ'd a tad bit better/ But you did a great choice in vocals. Try to EQ to make it fit better into the song and try to ease it in. The cool sound effects need to be EQ'd a bit as well. I love the vocal chopping in the double time. Very great piece! I hope to hear more from you in the future!